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Post by malika on Jan 2, 2004 8:44:23 GMT -5
here you go, a little something to start off:
Criminal organization:
Aracnus (temporary name)
Organization Leadership: Not much is known about the high top of the organization, rumors are however that there is a xenos presence in the high top, however that is still unsure.
Lower leaders are more known, most of them are gang leaders.
Gangs: Most gangs who are part of Aracnus consist of between 5 and 25 members, high presence of aracnus members in cargo bay areas, rumored arrival places of xenos products, weapons, and illegal narcotics. No investigation under by the inquisition yet, minor investigations by the adeptus arbites.
Rumored contact between Aracnus and local government: There are rumors that Aracnus has an influence in the local government, or even that there are Aracnus members present in the government. Some Arbites investigators are missing after trying to investigate on this matter.
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Post by Kage2020 on Jan 2, 2004 8:47:54 GMT -5
See! I knew that you could do it with a bit of prodding. Remember, however, that we need to define all that secret information as well and publish it for comments. It's no fun if you try and keep everything to yourself! Kage
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Post by malika on Jan 2, 2004 8:52:48 GMT -5
Well we could also keep stuff a secret, adds a bit of mystery, I mean maybe we should do it from vertain points of view, if we write fluff from an imperial point of view, then the info about xenos will be rumors at most.
But if we would write it from an eldar point of view, then it will give more information about the eldar presence in Aracnus.
Im getting intruiged by eldar presence in the group...I;v been reading a bit more of your eldar clan stuff...clan of the spider is interestion...hence the name Aracnus ;D
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Post by Sojourner on Jan 2, 2004 9:08:19 GMT -5
ARREST WARRANT - ADEPTUS ARBITES PRECINCT 1138 CUSTOMS AND EXCISE AUTHORITYArrests to be made; Assume noncooperation, armed hostiles to be terminated with extreme prejudice: - Suspect: Cassius Lucian Meldred
- Charges: Smuggling; 14 counts, Membership of a prohibited organisation; 1 count, Posession of prohibited items; 6 counts, Burglary; 1 count, Arson; 1 count
- Status: First offender
- Profile: hostile
- Suspect: Marco de Silvestra
- Charges: Murder, 2 counts, Membership of a prohibited organisation; 1 count, Smuggling; 3 counts, Failure to pay landing fees; 16 counts
- Status: Repeat offender
- Profile: hostile
AddendumThese persons are suspected members of the criminal syndicate codenamed 'Aracnus'; provision should be made to conceal identities of arresting officers and support personnel in case of retaliatory action. All persons associated with this organisation are to be arrested immediately and terminated if noncooperative
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Post by malika on Jan 2, 2004 14:38:19 GMT -5
well I think they arbites dont openly mention the name of that organisation, aracnus is kinda secret...and very powerfull, the arbites would prolly think it was some gang murder or something
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Post by malika on Jan 4, 2004 15:38:07 GMT -5
I think if we are going to involve the eldar in this, we could relate this to the eldar colony that is present in the sector, maybe the eldar "crimelord" is an agent from the colony, will it be one eldar agent? or more? I personally like the idea of an eldar ambassador/seer as a leading figure, and maybe a ranger as a bodyguard/hitman.
Maybe some outcast seer, but still a member of the Spider Clan.
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Post by Sojourner on Jan 4, 2004 15:53:20 GMT -5
Perhaps two; a Seer, in charge of the whole thing, and a Ranger operating as his security, both of whom disagree with the other's methods?
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Post by malika on Jan 4, 2004 16:26:20 GMT -5
hmm...the ranger would prolly agree with the farseer, the seer has made the whole plan, maybe a warlock under him that questions some things, but the ranger would be a bodyguard/assassin
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Post by Sojourner on Jan 4, 2004 16:29:44 GMT -5
They wouldn't agree if that was the point of them being there now would it?
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Post by malika on Jan 4, 2004 16:49:00 GMT -5
huh? I didnt understand that reply...maybe it's because english isnt my first language, ellaborate please
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Post by Kage2020 on Jan 5, 2004 9:32:07 GMT -5
hmm...the ranger would prolly agree with the farseer, the seer has made the whole plan, maybe a warlock under him that questions some things, but the ranger would be a bodyguard/assassin Seers are not the leaders of eldar society, although they do take an important role (which may shift to becoming very important depending on which craftworld they are from). Although I'm not necessarily disagreeing with the above set-up, let us move away from the necessarily obvious approach. There is no reason why there must be a Seer there. It is entirely possible for an Outcast to be working for their own purpose. Even though I suggested the Spider Clan integration, there is no reason why that must be the case... it does not have to be related to a craftworld. Anyway... enough said for the moment. Kage
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Post by malika on Jan 5, 2004 9:46:03 GMT -5
Well it could be cool to have it related to the eldar colony in the sector, then have some outcast captian lead it, I still prefere the ranger as assassin, maybe a hired gun. Hey you all got me into putting eldar in it...now Im intruiged, dont wanna leave them out anymore
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Post by malika on Jan 5, 2004 10:24:10 GMT -5
From: Adeptus Arbites Judge Isdream Kurn To: Adeptus Arbites command centre Anargo Incomming transmission: >>>Adeptus Arbites raid at star port 001 >>> >>> >>> 3 Terran days ago Arbites forces have raided star port 001 after receiving date about an illegal transport there. We send out forces to the area, and the star port was easily occupied. However as soon as we had control of the star port. But then the power went down, it was dark, and completely silent, I heard a scream, a familiar voice, one of my Arbites was dead. I ordered my men to bring power back to the port. As soon as power was restored another one of my Arbites fell down, dead, his head was exploded. Then one of my investigators found some more corpses on the landing pad and in the cargo bay. We also found numerous empty container units, the goods in the containers must have been taken when the power was down. After investigation of the corpses of my Arbites and the gangers, the Arbites Medicus reported to me that the ammunition used was something he has never seen before. Rumors about a xenos assassin are spreading amongst my men, therefore I request a specialized investigation unit to be send in, thereby hopefully ending these rumors about xenos scum for once and for all. >>> End of Transmission.
2 Terran days after this transmission Adeptus Arbites Judge Isdream Kurn was found dead in a container unit in star port 001, his head separated from his body, after autopsy the investigator reported that the cut in the neck was made by an unknown weapon.
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Post by Sojourner on Jan 5, 2004 10:58:22 GMT -5
My point was, malika, if we decide that there is a little friction between the Eldar agents in Aracnus, if any, it would be to make the story interesting so commonality of Eldar background would be suspended.
I do really like the idea of an Eldar somewhere in the puzzle though.
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Post by malika on Jan 5, 2004 11:02:18 GMT -5
ow ok I get what you mean now, it could be cool, but still eldar presence should be limited, 1...2 eldar...erm a question, are wraith guards rare? are they used as bodyguards? maybe a wraithguard body guard...not that active, always close to his master
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