Feedback is still as welcome as ever, but I hope that everyone realises that I consider the SR mostly done. Therefore, suggestions such as "how about instead of a feudal knight world, it's a democratic hive world" or other major changes are not that welcome
One thing that you might consider before 'publishing' to the Archive (too late, but it's a hint) is rewriting the section on the culture. Perhaps take a look at an online description of feudalism and borrow the inspiration, terms or whatever. It would just make the final SR feel that much more... cleaner. Clearer. Whatever word you wish to use.
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;D Well, that's a pretty strong hint right there! I'll do as you say, when I get around to it. Probably within the next few days, because I'm desperate to finish my worlds in the Archaios subsector at the moment, so I can breathe easy and give my full attention other areas later.
Well, I've done some minor modification based on some online definitions of feudalism. Take a look in the archives. If you still find it unsatisfactory, perhaps you could point me in the right direction...?