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Post by CELS on Dec 10, 2004 2:41:36 GMT -5
Feedback is still as welcome as ever, but I hope that everyone realises that I consider the SR mostly done. Therefore, suggestions such as "how about instead of a feudal knight world, it's a democratic hive world" or other major changes are not that welcome
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Post by Dazo on Dec 10, 2004 3:19:35 GMT -5
Hahaha, I have said that so many times myself*cough Proculus cough* ah well, I can dream, I can dream.
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Post by Kage2020 on Dec 11, 2004 11:01:38 GMT -5
One thing that you might consider before 'publishing' to the Archive (too late, but it's a hint) is rewriting the section on the culture. Perhaps take a look at an online description of feudalism and borrow the inspiration, terms or whatever. It would just make the final SR feel that much more... cleaner. Clearer. Whatever word you wish to use.
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Post by CELS on Dec 12, 2004 8:04:09 GMT -5
;D Well, that's a pretty strong hint right there! I'll do as you say, when I get around to it. Probably within the next few days, because I'm desperate to finish my worlds in the Archaios subsector at the moment, so I can breathe easy and give my full attention other areas later.
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Post by Kage2020 on Dec 12, 2004 17:31:25 GMT -5
Better sooner than later... Again, it just makes you sound like you don't know what you're talking about, and that woud be an unfair way of representing yourself!
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Post by CELS on Dec 13, 2004 2:40:24 GMT -5
Well, I've done some minor modification based on some online definitions of feudalism. Take a look in the archives. If you still find it unsatisfactory, perhaps you could point me in the right direction...?
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Post by Dazo on Dec 23, 2004 13:10:49 GMT -5
Are you going to do the extended system description, I know theres only two worlds, but for the sake of completeness....
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